2022.5.7 |外教范文分析(含阅读范文)

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喜欢吃辣的加拿大大叔雅思托福在一线教了10多年的中文,头像是他的家猫在这里分享他的原创雅思书籍。干货各范文有配音。 用同名的公众号“英语考试Cat”你好。 我是从加拿大来的外国讲师Mac。 今天,给大家带来2022年5月7日大陆雅思大作文真题的范文和解析。 旧规则,以下是正文目录。 1、主题2、审题3、高分范文4、范文朗读5、范文地道词汇中英对照,包括:

2022.5.7 |外教范文分析(含阅读范文)

主题转换讨论观点类大作文高分句型表示“词汇丰富”的词汇短语“连贯与联系”的词汇句型

上题: somepeoplethinkthatitisbettertoleavetheirhomecountryforimprovingtheirworkandlivingopportunities.othersbelievethatitisbettttisbes

Type: Discuss Opinion讨论观点( depends on the inpidual ) )。 body1: don’tmindbeingdetachedfromcultureandhaveconfidence:why better出境更好的原因body2: remaininhomecountryiseasierandvoidofce keywords:isbetterforimprovingworkandlivingopportunities/intheirhomecountry

-朗读- Model Answer高分范文-

范文语音戳此处therearethosethatfeelasuperiormethodofdevelopingone’sworkandlifeopportunitiesistomigratetoanothernation; whereas,othersfeelremainingintheirownsocietyisbetter.thisessayshallexplorebothviewpoints; however,in my opinion,‘better’prospectsdependontheinpidual’ssituationandmindset。

oneofthemainreasonswhysomefeelitisbettertoleaveone’scountryinpursuitofgreateropportunitiesisthatbymovingoverseas, themigrantmayfeelliberatedfromanysocialconventionsthatactedasahindrance.inotherwords,byhavingtheconfidencetomoveabroad, onemayfeelmuchlessrestrainedbyone’sowntraditionalandculturalnorms,and in many cases,thiscanalsoincludefamilyandperessure inconjunctionwithchoosingtomigratetoacountrythatwelcomesforeignersandiseconomicallysalient,makeopportunitiesforanimprovedstaliet

On the other hand,itisfeltbymanythatbyremaininginone’sown culture, itissimplymucheasiertofindopportunitiesandismorecomfortable.bystayinginone’sown society,aninpidualcanstillretainthecomforecomfore and perhaps more importantly,thepersondoesnotneedtoadapttoanewcultureornewlanguage, allofwhichmakeiteasiertolocateasuitablejobandwhichareconducivetoconstructingasatisfactorylifestyle.further more, apersonlivingintheirownsocietywillfinditmuchlessconfusingtounderstandthebureaucraticinsandoutsoftheirownsociety。

In conclusion、goingabroadtoseekbetterprospectsmaybeidealforthepersonwhohastheconfidencetoadapttoanewsociety、but for many、 remaininginafamiliarenvironmentstillallowsforworkandlifestyleopportunitiesvoidoftheconfusionaforeigncountryposes; however,in my opinion,regardless where one resides,opportunities are ever-present,withtherewardbeingalifestyleofchoicerathes

- Essay Analysis范文分析-

-1) introductiontherearethosethatfeelasuperiormethodofdevelopingone’sworkandlifeopportunitiesistomigratetoanothernation othersfeelremainingintheirownsocietyisbetter.thisessayshallexplorebothviewpoints; however,in my opinion,‘better’prospectsdependontheinpidual’ssituationandmindset。

更改paraphrasingfromthestatement/question主题:

somepeoplethinkthat=therearethosethatfeelisbetter=superiormethodtoleave=to migrate ( leave ) homecountry=) migrateto ) anothernationforimproving=ofdevelopingliving=lifestandardphraseforthe“discuss opinion”type essay讨论观点类大作文高分句型:

There are those that feel; whereas,othersfeelthisessayshallexplorebothviewpoints; however,inmyopinionwordsshowingcohesion ( cc )展示了“一致和联系”的词和短语。

one’s; whereas,otherstheir ownThis; however,Vocabulary高分地道词汇和短语:

superior占优势的更好的migrate向prospects移民前景mindset心态; 想法

(2) body1- aspectsthatmustbereferredto )本段应提及:

why going overseas is better为什么出国更好oneofthemainreasonswhysomefeelitisbettertoleaveone’scountryinpursuitofgreateropportunion overseas,themigrantmayfeelliberatedfromanysocialconventionsthatactedasahindrance.inotherwords,byhavingtheconfidencetomove onemayfeelmuchlessrestrainedbyone’sowntraditionalandculturalnorms,and in many cases,thiscanalsoincludefamilyandperessure inconjunctionwithchoosingtomigratetoacountrythatwelcomesforeignersandiseconomicallysalient,makeopportunitiesforanimprovedstaliet

标准IELTS essay phrase雅思高频句型:

oneofthemainreasonswhy…isthatvocabularyandcollocations高分地道词汇和短语:

overseas海外the migrant移民; 移民liberated解放social conventions社会习俗hindrance干扰; 阻碍abroad国外less restrained的限制少限制少限制的traditional and cultural norms传统和文化习俗peer pressure同辈的压力economically salient经济上更好的wordsshowing

isthatbymovingthatactedasainotherwords,byhavingbyone’s,and in many cases,this can alsoThese aspects,inconjunctiontionwits

-3) body2- aspectsthatmustbereferredto此段落必须提及:

remaining inone’shomecountryisbetter为什么最好留在本国On the other hand,itisfeltbymanythatbyremaininginone’sown culture, itissimplymucheasiertofindopportunitiesandismorecomfortable.bystayinginone’sown society,aninpidualcanstillretainthecomforecomfore and perhaps more importantly,thepersondoesnotneedtoadapttoanewcultureornewlanguage, allofwhichmakeiteasiertolocateasuitablejobandwhichareconducivetoconstructingasatisfactorylifestyle.further more, apersonlivingintheirownsocietywillfinditmuchlessconfusingtounderstandthebureaucraticinsandoutsoftheirownsociety。

标准IELTS essay phrase雅思高频句型:

On the other hand,itisfeltbymany…vocabularyandcollocations高分的地道词汇和短语:

保留; 维持Conducive to有利于有利的Bureaucratic官僚的复杂的Ins and outs内外; 经过wordsshowingcohesion [ signpostingwords,conjunctions,relative pronouns ] (抄送中显示了“一致性和联系”的词汇和短语。

On the other hand,itthat byBy staying,and perhaps more importantly,allofwhichmakeiteasiertoandwhichfurthermore

(4) Conclusion -

In conclusion、goingabroadtoseekbetterprospectsmaybeidealforthepersonwhohastheconfidencetoadapttoanewsociety、but for many、 remaininginafamiliarenvironmentstillallowsforworkandlifestyleopportunitiesvoidoftheconfusionaforeigncountryposes; however,in my opinion,regardless where one resides,opportunities are ever-present,withtherewardbeingalifestyleofchoicerathes

标准IELTS essay phrase雅思高频句型:

In conclusion,in my opinion,Vocabulary and Collocations高分地道词汇和短语:

没有void of不足的poses引起的; ever-present的产生无处不在…ofchoiceratherthanoneofcircumstance ( expression ) wordsshowingcohesion [ signpostingwords,cord

may be ideal for,but for many,remaining; however,regardless where one

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